Question

作文（共25分）
下面描繪的是醉酒駕車的違章行為，請你根據這幅漫畫用英語寫一篇短文。要求:
1.簡要描述圖片的內容, 但不能用引語。
2.分析醉酒駕車的原因及其危害并提出措施。
3.發表你的看法。
參考詞匯： drunk driving 醉駕
注意：詞數120左右。開頭已經寫好，不計入總詞數。

This is a picture which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among some drivers in our country. In the picture,________________________________________
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Answer 1

This is a picture which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among some drivers in our country. In the picture, a drunken driver is caught speeding. He has drunk so much that he can’t walk normally
It is well known that drunk driving has been the leading cause of road accidents. What are the reasons for the phenomenon? The lack of safety awareness is the direct reason. Besides, some people believe that drinking a little does no harm to their driving. Drunk driving is a great danger both to our society and to drivers. It’s time we took some measures to make a total ban on drinking. Firstly, we should reinforce the traffic security education to raise people’s awareness towards safety. Secondly, the government should make stricter laws about it and punish drunk drivers severely. Thirdly, we can make posters and signs warning people not to drive after drinking.
In my opinion, people should build up self conscience and pay enough attention to their daily driving. If we can keep on doing this, the road accidents will decrease soon in the future.

試題分析：這是一篇看圖說話類作文，首先必須看懂漫畫的內容，描繪的是醉酒駕車的違章行為，所以要用第三人稱來寫。然后再仔細分析題目的要求:1.簡要描述圖片的內容, 但不能用引語。 2.分析醉酒駕車的原因及其危害并提出措施。 3.發表你的看法。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現文章脫節問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字數詞數120左右，不要太多也不要太少。
點評：本文屬于看圖說話類，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。