Question

請根據下圖寫一篇100~120詞的短文。
要點：  1. 簡要描寫圖畫內容。   2. 說明圖畫的含義。 3. 談談你的看法。

注意：短文的開頭已給出（不計字數）
In the picture, we can see that _________________________________________
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Answer 1

In the picture, we can see that the girl’s parents and her grandmother are helping the girl, which makes it impossible for the girl to ride bicycle on herself. What is more ridiculous is that her mother even carries a first-aid kit for her.     
In fact, this is not a picture just for fun. It tells us that parents should not help their children too much. They should let their children be more independent.      
Many parents share the opinion that they must get everything ready for their children so that their children could focus more on their study. They all fail to realize that with the help of this kind, children won’t be able to live their own life without their parents in the future.    
Love and attention are needed in the growth of a child, but it should never be too much, or you will spoil the child and he will accomplish nothing in his life.

本文是一篇漫畫作文。漫畫作文寫作主要通過三步完成：
第一步：認真觀察，正確敘述畫面內容。
畫面的主體往往是人物。要仔細觀察畫面中人物的形體，相貌，表情，語言，動作等，推測人物的思想面貌，尤其注意人物在干什么；還要觀察周圍環境，弄清事件發生的時間，地點以及和事件有關的情況，然后把這些信息連貫性地表達出來，使靜止的畫面“活動化”。平面的事物“立體化”。通常以記敘為主，用一般現在時態或一般過去時態，第三人稱。
第二步：選點立意。
通過收集畫面所提供的內容，去粗取精，揣摩畫意，揭示實質，得出結論。
第三步：引發評論。
與現實生活聯系，由此及彼地加以聯想與引申，在畫面意義的基礎上聯想到另一層新
內容，發表自己的看法，可以提出一些建議和辦法。
第二和第三步沒有明顯界線。可以一氣呵成，以議論為主。
常用句型;
1.開頭：This is a picture about…/ In the picture we can see…/ From the picture it can be seen that…/ Let’s look at the picture…
2.結尾段：It is not right that…/ If they do like that…/ We can draw a conclusion that…/ The story tells us that …/ It teaches us a lesson…
3.承接詞匯及句型：in my opinion / in our daily life / nowadays / As the proverb says …/ I’m sure… / meanwhile / however / at the same time / but / so / as a result / Do you think so?...
4.另外，漫畫作文在揭示實質后往往會有精彩的諺語，格言，成語等出現，給文章添彩不少。如：No pains, no gains. / All work and no play makes Jake a dull boy. / Dripping water wears through rock./ Constant effort brings success.（滴水能穿石，功到自然成）/Use “one stone” to kill “two birds”（一石擊雙鳥）