Question

1．鼠標是計算機時代最佳的人機交互工具之一．它極大地方便了人們的計算機操作．但是，過分依賴鼠標的習慣也會帶來一些不利影響．請你以鼠標為切入點，根據下表所提示的信息，用英語寫一篇短文．

鼠標的必要性	對多數人來說，操作計算機，上網沖浪…
鼠標的便捷性	點擊、移動、插入、拷貝、刪除…	編輯文本，搜索信息…
		收發郵件，選購商品…
		點播音樂，下載電影…
如果過分依賴鼠標…（請考生結合自身感受，列舉兩到三點）

注意：
1 對所給要點逐一陳述，適當發揮，不要簡單翻譯．
2 詞數150左右．開頭已經寫好，不計人總詞數．
3作文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名．
The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer．

Answer 1

分析 本文為提綱式說明文體裁，所選內容與我們生活相關，考生只要把所給要點逐條陳述，適度發揮，不要逐條翻譯即可．文章說理清楚，語言流暢，句式表達多樣，用詞恰當、準確．
亮點部分  For most people，it's almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse，let alone surf the Internet．（高分句型一）句中it 為形式主語，to do不定式為真正的主語，let alone意為"更不必說"
With the functions of inserting，deleting，moving and copying，it enables us to edit test，browse web page and download what we want．（高分句型二）句中what為賓語從句
Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically．（高分句型三）句中Relying too much on mouse clicking 為動名詞作主語

解答 The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer．
     For most people，it's almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse，let alone surf the Internet．（高分句型一）A well-chosen mouse is really handy，flexible and convenient in controlling the screen．With the functions of inserting，deleting，moving and copying，it enables us to edit test，browse web page and download what we want．（高分句型二）It can even bring us a flood of music，movies and PC games．Just imagine，all this can be done with a cute mouse．（鼠標的必要性）
     A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier，but it doesn't always help in a positive way．Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing．Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth．Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically．（高分句型三）（鼠標的便捷性）（153 words）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．