Question

    英語課上老師要求同學們交換修改作文，現在請你修改你同桌的作文。文中共有10處錯誤

要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出改正后的詞。

注意： 1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2、只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計分。

Dear classmates,

Now I’d like to tell you why I learn English. I often read English aloud and try learn something important by hearts, which helps me remember it easily and form the good habit of thinking in English. I listen to a lot and talk with others in English. In this way, I was improved my spoken English. I keep a diary in English every day but my writing English is becoming better and better. I also try my best to master the necessary grammar. By this mean, I can express myself in English correct. That’s the way I have been learning English. I hope it will be useful to you.

That’s all. Thank you.

Answer 1

Dear classmates,

Now I’d like to tell you why I learn English. I often read English aloud and try ∧ learn

                   how                                          to

something important by hearts, which helps me remember it easily and form the good habit of

                heart

thinking with English. I listen to a lot and talk with others in English. In this way, I was

    in                                                          have

improved my spoken English. I keep a diary in English every day but my writing English is

                                                and    written

becoming better and better. I also try my best to master the necessary grammar. By this mean, I

                                                                  means

can express myself in English correct. That’s the way I have been learning English. I hope it will

                    correctly

be useful to you. That’s all. Thank you.

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