假如英語課上老師要求同學們交換修改作文, 請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤, 要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處寫一個漏字符號（
）, 在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線, 在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：
1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處, 多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Last Saturday I went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
Last Saturday 1 went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading usual
near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened. when heard
happening shocked
I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were
people
standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I 
pushed through the crowd as Itook off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back andto safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved. my
I was proud what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is inneed. of
解析【小題1】as usual正如往常 固定短語
【小題2】while 引導的從句中，謂語動詞應是延續性動詞。
【小題3】時態前后應一致。
【小題4】happen是不及物動詞，不能用被動
【小題5】我感到驚訝，應用shocked
【小題6】people是一個集體名詞，始終表示復數概念。解釋為“民族”時，才可以用單復數形式。
【小題7】take off 的動作與push 的動作同時發生，不用過去完成時
【小題8】這里是并列的動作，沒有轉折關系。
【小題9】本文是以第一人稱寫的，故用to my great relief.
【小題10】be proud of +n. 或名詞性從句
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假如英語課上老師要求同學們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有8處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
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