Question

5．假如你叫李明，請你根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇英語短文向你班同學(xué)介紹你是如何慶祝中秋節(jié)的．
提示：上個月，我和父母回家鄉(xiāng)和祖父母團(tuán)聚共慶中秋節(jié)，中秋節(jié)夜晚，我們一起賞月吃月餅，月餅很好吃，并和家人吃了大餐，奶奶給我們講了嫦娥的故事，爺爺鼓勵我努力學(xué)習(xí)，將來當(dāng)宇航員（astronaut），我們也參觀了一些地方，玩的很開心．
要求：字跡清晰，語句通順．不少于80詞
Last month，I went to my himetown with my parents to celebrate the Mid-autumn Festival with my grandparents．On the Mid-autumn night，we admired the moon and shared mooncakes together．The mooncakes were delicious．We had a bid meal．My grandma told us a story about Chang'e．My grandpa encouraged me to study hard to be an astronaut in the future．And we Chinese could make the dream of the moon landing come true．We visited some places of interest．We had a good time．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
My grandpa encouraged me to study hard to be an astronaut in the future爺爺鼓勵我努力學(xué)習(xí)，將來當(dāng)宇航員．
encourage sb to do sth鼓勵某人做某事
【高分句型二】
We had a good time．
我們玩的很開心．
have a good time玩的很開心．

解答 Last month，I went to my himetown with my parents to celebrate the Mid-autumn Festival with my grandparents．（一起過節(jié)）On the Mid-autumn night，we admired the moon and shared mooncakes together．The mooncakes were delicious．We had a bid meal．My grandma told us a story about Chang'e．My grandpa encouraged me to study hard to be an astronaut in the future．【高分句型一】And we Chinese could make the dream of the moon landing come true．We visited some places of interest．（經(jīng)過）We had a good time．【高分句型二】

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