Question

17．為了進一步增強中學生的安全意思，提高自我保護能力，請以"How to Keep Safe"為題，根據以下提示寫．注意：表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規范；詞數80左右．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
It's necessary to obey the rules in P．E class or in the swimming pool體育課或者游泳課的時候遵守規則是必要的．
it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．
【高分句型二】
When we are in trouble，we can always ask our teachers for help當我們有麻煩的時候，我們總是可以找老師幫忙．
when引導的時間狀語從句．

解答 How to Keep Safe
It's necessary to obey the rules in P．E class or in the swimming pool．【高分句型一】We mustn't bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems．（課堂安全）After class，we'd better try our best to guard against any possible danger．Please don't play dangerous games or chase each other．It's impolite to bully classmates who are short or small．（ 課間安全）Sometimes we may also feel stressed．Listening to music and doing some sports will make it easier for us to relax ourselves．（心理安全）
   When we are in trouble，we can always ask our teachers for help．【高分句型二】I am sure they are willing to offer advice．Besides，posters can be put up to help students know more about how to keep safe at school．If everyone can pay more attention to safety，we are sure to have a safe and wonderful school life．（我的意見）

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