Question

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假設你是學校Health Club的成員，最近你對你校學生進行了一項有關生活方式（our lifestyle）的調查，相關信息見下表。請根據表格內容為校廣播站寫一篇60詞左右的英文廣播稿。廣播稿的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

交通方式	很多學生坐公共汽車上學，一些學生由家長開車送到，很少（a few）騎車或走路上學；
飲食和運動	喜歡吃漢堡，冰激淋；不喜歡吃水果和蔬菜；很少鍛煉。

Hello everyone! I’m from The Health Club. I want to tell you something about our lifestyle.
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                             

Answer 1

Hello everyone! I’m from The Health Club. I want tell you something about our lifestyle. Many students go to school by bus, some students go to school in their parents’ cars. But only a few students goes to school by bike or on foot. And they like hamburgers and ice cream, but they don’t often eat fruit and vegetables. The students don’t exercise often. I think it’s bad for their health.

解析試題分析：本文的寫作首先對寫作的總體目的進行陳述I want tell you something about our lifestyle.來表達寫作的目的。然后根據文章的提綱來講述學生們的交通出行方式，如by bus，in their parents’ cars，by bike or on foot來表達相應的意思。最后對學生們的飲食習慣進行介紹并提出自己的觀點。
考點：提綱類寫作
點評：初中英語的作文特別是初一的作文，著重考察學生連詞成句的能力，要在“準”字上下功夫。在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數關系和動詞時態等諸多方面。對于中學作文的寫作，盡量將所學的知識運用到作文中，寫出富于變化、結構緊湊的文章，不要出現中式英文。在平時的練習中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子進行默寫，考試時就能寫出準確地道的作文。