Question

書面表達

你從網上購買了一臺手機，但不到一個月，手機就出現了故障多次，你決定向公司投訴，請從以下幾個方面寫一封投訴信。

(1)購買原因、時間：為更方便與朋友聯系；兩周之前購買。

(2)手機故障：打開一小時就自動關機；電池只能保電一天。

(3)理想中的手機：連續工作一周不需換電池；聲音清晰。

(4)要求：更換一個新型號的手機，增加一個電池，對日常生活很有影響，如再出現故障就退款。

要求：1、詞數：80－100字。

2、覆蓋要點，語言流暢；

3、內容充實，結構合理；

4、注意格式，書寫工整。

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Answer 1

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解析：

In order to connect with my friends easily, I bought a mobile phone online two weeks ago．However, for less than a month, it has gone wrong/has broken down/there have been many problems．First, it often stopped working completely after I turned on it for an hour．Also, its batteries only lasted for one week．I’m not satisfied with it at all． 　　I think my ideal mobile phone should last for at least one week without changing the batteries．/I expect a mobile phone to last for at least one week without changing the batteries． 　　Please change a new kind of mobile phone and give me one more/another battery． 　　Mobile phone is very important in everyday life．I would like to get my money hack if there is something wrong with it． Yours faithfully Tom