Question

書面表達

你喜歡網上購物嗎？你對“網購”這一現象有何看法？請寫一篇短文，從購物的時效性、安全性、商品的品種、質量、價格等方面說說“網購”相對于傳統購物方式的優勢與劣勢。

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Answer 1

【答案】

With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life. Here consumers can buy almost everything they need.

Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses. The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.

However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goods or try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點的議論文作文，主題是網上購物的優缺點。要求中只給出了要點，需要自己發揮的地方較多。要求中已經給出了部分提示，動筆先應先認真閱讀提示，確定寫作內容。寫作中注意表達觀點時的常用句式，注意在表達不同觀點時，連詞的使用。內容上應注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。

考點：命題作文的寫作

點評：本題給出的材料較為簡略，可發揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內容發揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。