the→a.冠詞的錯(cuò)誤.這里表示“一個(gè)更好的地方 .用a better place而不是“那個(gè)更好的地方 ,注意后面的place to live是正確的.可以將掉尾介詞in省略. 書面表達(dá)范文: There’s a lot of talk in my class about whether the senior 3 students should spare the time to take part in the winter long run program. 60% of the students think it a good idea, which can require us to take exercise every day. Besides running, we can do many sports such as morning exercises, playing ping-pong ball and playing basketball, but it shouldn’t take up too much time. Exercise builds one’s body and reduces diseases. Sports let their brains have a rest so that their revision will be more effective. On the other hand, 30% believe taking exercise is a waste of time and tiring. After having sports, they are much too excited for a long time to pay attention to their lessons. It’s also possible to be hurt in sports. As far as I’m concerned, I think it necessary for us to take some exercise. After some exercise, we can feel more refreshed and relaxed, which can help us learn better. 【查看更多】
