Question

假如你上周末參加了某旅行社組織的所謂生態(tài)游，你覺得名不副實。請你根據下表內容把自己經歷的這次生態(tài)游和對真正生態(tài)游的看法寫出來。
1. 所謂的生態(tài)游：
欣賞風景，享受新鮮空氣
有人摘花、捉鳥、亂扔垃圾
2. 真正的生態(tài)游：
享受自然，同時也是一種責任
要保護自然，保護野生動物
帶走美好回憶，留下青山綠水

Answer 1

Last weekend I went on an eco-travel with a travel agency. All the way we enjoyed the beautiful scenery and fresh air. But a few of us picked flowers while going sightseeing. Some even tried to catch the birds they saw. What was worse, many tourists threw rubbish here and there. The rubbish may do harm to wildlife there.
　I don’t think this is a true eco-travel. A true eco-travel is a tour that not only allows us to express our love for nature, but needs our responsibility as well. As we enjoy the beauty of nature, we should try our best to protect it. And we should also try to protect wildlife. A true eco-travel should be like this: take nothing away but your good memory; leave nothing behind but all the green trees and the clean water.

試題分析：本文是一篇提綱式的作文，關于人們關注的旅游問題。從所謂的生態(tài)游到真正的生態(tài)游，分兩段展開描寫，要點是以提綱形式列出，提示里都已經給了出來，考生只需要翻譯即可，注意用地道的英語表達。適當運用高級詞匯和句型，時態(tài)以現(xiàn)在時為主。還要注意句與句的聯(lián)系。如范文的句子A true eco-travel is a tour that not only allows us to express our love for nature, but needs our responsibility as well.
點評：本文屬于提綱類短寫作，此類短文寫作要求包括提綱中所給的所有要點，不能有遺漏。使用合適的連接詞把要點連接成流暢合理的短文，變化使用高級句式讓文章的檔次更高。