Question

文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號∧，并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線＼劃掉。

修改：在錯詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2、只允許修改10處，多者從第11處不計分。

In modern society, competition is everywhere. No wonder a English philosopher considers competition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety. Therefore, if we stress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. In my opinion, all are important and necessary.

Let's take the competition at school for example. Even a gifted student won't make a remarkable progress if he is in a class without competition. That's because competition, and rather, challenge is a driving force made him go forward. On the other hand, if we don't cooperate with each other, it's impossible for us learn from each other. And that's why most of the great discoveries or inventions in the modern world are the result of cooperation.

To conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with the relationship between competition and cooperation.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

In modern society, competition is everywhere. No wonder a English philosopher considers

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competition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety. Therefore, if we

problems                          However

stress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. In my opinion, all are important and

stressed                                                   both

necessary.

 

Let's take the competition at school for example. Even a gifted student won't make a

 

remarkable progress if he is in a class without competition. That's because competition, and rather,

                                                                      or

challenge is a driving force made him go forward. On the other hand, if we don't cooperate with

                      making

each other, it's impossible for us ∧learn from each other. And that's why most of the great

                           to

discoveries or inventions in the modern world are the result of cooperation.

To conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with the

successfully

relationship between competition and cooperation.

【解析】

1.文中第一行a改為an，因為English首字母發音是元音。

2.第二行中，a series of一系列，所以problem改為problems。

3.第二行中，這里表示然而，所以Therefore改為However。

4.第三行中，對現在的虛擬，所以stress改為stressed。

5.第三行中，all 改為both，文章提及的是競爭與合作，是兩者不是三者，所以用both。

6. 第四行，第二個a去掉。Progress是不可數名詞，用零冠詞。

7. 第五行，and改為or，or rather表確切地說，是固定搭配。

8. 第六行，made改為making，這里making為后置定語，屬于主動結構，相當于which makes……

9.第七行，us與 learn間加to，for sb. to do是不定式的復合結構，是句子的真正主語。

10.文中第九行，successful改為successfully，修飾動詞短語需用副詞。

考點：考查學生對詞匯語法的掌握情況

點評：答題中注意句子中人稱和數是否一致，時態是否一致。各種詞性之間的區別以及一些常用句型，固定短語的應用。一般的這類題型不會出現太復雜的單詞和句子，這類題型考查的就是我們的基礎知識。平時應注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結構。修改前先細讀短文，標出出錯的位置，改完以后還得細讀短文，看看改過后的短文是否語意通順，符合邏輯。