Question

英語課上,老師要求同桌同學相互修改作文。假設以下作文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進行修改。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（^），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

3．必須按答題要求做題，否則不給分。

As we all know it, many children have to spend their weekends and holidays attending various training courses though they are unwilling to. That’s why their parents don’t want him to fall behind at the starting line. Instead, they hope their children are equipping with as many skills as possible. Therefore they won’t lose face when comparing their children with others’. Beside, they are sure these extra classes will help their children standing out and become more competitive in the future. Actually, it was unwise to force children to do that they don’t like. Too many training classes will be heavy burden for children. Parents shouldn’t push their children too hardly.

Answer 1

As we all know it(刪掉), many children have to spend their weekends and holidays attending various training courses though they are unwilling to. That’s why(because) their parents don’t want him(them) to fall behind at the starting line. Instead, they hope their children are equipping(equipped) with as many skills as possible. Therefore they won’t lose face when comparing their children with others’. Beside(Besides), they are sure these extra classes will help their children standing(stand) out and become more competitive in the future. Actually, it was(is) unwise to force children to do that(what) they don’t like. Too many training classes will be(a) heavy burden for children. Parents shouldn’t push their children too hardly(hard).