Question

【題目】高中階段，學業繁重，為了保證學習時間，學校決定在高三取消體育課。但學生普遍認為應該勞逸結合，體育鍛煉在高三也是必不可少的�，F請你給校長寫一篇保留一節體育課的倡議信.。

注意：1.內容包括：（1）取消體育課的弊端；

（2）說明課外活動和體育活動的必要性和益處，至少三點。

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

3. 詞數100左右

Dear headmaster,

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Yours sincerely,

student

Answer 1

【答案】Dear headmaster,

It is known that our school intends to cancel our sports class when we are in Grade 3. Teachers and parents may agree, for there is only one year left for us to take the college entrance exam. However, we students hold the view that we should combine work and rest.

First of all, supposing there is no sports class, we will have no time to take exercise, which will badly influence our body health. Besides, actively taking part in sports activities will not only make our school life colorful, but also improve our learning. In addition to building our bodies and enriching our knowledge, the activities also free ourselves from the heavy work of study. Last but not least, to be well prepared for the final exam, it is necessary that senior students attach importance to take exercise and keep healthy.

In a nutshell, it is strongly recommended that our school arrange one sports class a week for us. Looking forward to your agreement. Thank you very much.

Yours sincerely,

student

【解析】本文書面表達屬于應用文，要求寫一封倡議信。

第1步：根據提示可知，本篇是一封倡議信：高中階段，學業繁重，為了保證學習時間，學校決定在高三取消體育課。但學生普遍認為應該勞逸結合，體育鍛煉在高三也是必不可少的。現請你給校長寫一篇保留一節體育課的倡議信.。注意：1.內容包括：（1）取消體育課的弊端；（2）說明課外活動和體育活動的必要性和益處，至少三點。2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。3. 詞數100左右。

第2步：根據寫作要求確定關鍵詞，如：It is known that（眾所周知）；cancel our sports class（取消我們的體育課）；the college entrance exam（高考）；In addition to（除了---之外）；Last but not least（最后但并不是最不重要的）等。

第3步：根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態語態問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

本文內容完整，語言規范，語篇連貫，詞數適當。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。

【亮點說明】

本文是一封倡議信，格式正確，內容符合要求，文章結構布局合理，文找那個使用高級詞匯和句子。It is known that our school intends to cancel our sports class when we are in Grade 3.主語從句和when引導的時間狀語從句完美結合；Teachers and parents may agree, for there is only one year left for us to take the college entrance exam.此句中for是一個并列連詞；to be well prepared for the final exam, it is necessary that senior students attach importance to take exercise and keep healthy.動詞不定式一般式的被動式做目的狀語；另外，However, First of all, Besides, In addition to，Last but not least, In a nutshell,等的運用為文章增色添彩。