Question

現(xiàn)在，大多數(shù)學生選擇住校， 在寢室里同學之間難免會發(fā)生一些小摩擦。 上周二晚上十點半，張方和李華發(fā)生了爭吵（張方開燈學習，疲憊一天的李華無法入睡）,雙方都不肯讓步......），你當時在場，努力地讓他們冷靜下來，告知他們同學之間都應該彼此理解。他們意識到錯誤并重修于好。你覺得同學之間應該要互相理解，要交流并包容才能營造和諧的環(huán)境。請用英文寫一篇關于這件事的短文。詞數(shù)：100-120。你的文章應包括下列要點：

1.張方和李華發(fā)生爭吵；2.你幫助解決他們之間的矛盾；3.你的看法。

注：爭吵quarrel 重修于好： make up; 包容： tolerate （開頭已給出）

Creating a harmonious（和諧 ）environment

Now in our school, as many students live in the school dormitories, it is hard to avoid quarrels. ___________________________________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Creating a harmonious environment

Now in our school, as many students live in the school dormitories, it is hard to avoid quarrels. Last Tuesday Zhang Fang stayed up doing her homework after 10:30pm in the dormitory. Feeling tired, Li Hua went to bed immediately. But she couldn't fall asleep with lights on. She got so angry that she lost her temper and quarreled with Zhang Fang. Neither of them would give in and the quarrel continued. While they were quarreling, I tried to calm them down, saying all of us should care about others. They realized their mistakes and made up finally.

After all, we share the same school and everyone is part of the big family. Whenever we face any problem, we should learn to understand and communicate with each other. Only when we think more for others can we create a harmonious environment.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于記敘文。記敘了同學之間發(fā)生的一次小摩擦，審題時注意本文使用一般過去時，敘述事實的時候以時間為順序。用合適的連詞把各句連接成一個有機的整體，同時要用相對高級的詞匯提升文章的層次和文采。在發(fā)表你的看法的時候，可以使用諺語讓文章更有亮點。

考點：考查記敘文短文寫作

點評：記敘文的寫作近幾年考查較少，寫作的時候要注意要點的全覆蓋，不能有遺漏或省略，同時要注意使用合適的連接詞和較高級的詞匯。注意所使用的語法規(guī)則的準確性和合理性。變化使用多種句式讓文章更有亮點。