Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文, 根據所給情節進行續寫,使之構成一個完整的故事。

On Friday evening, Emmett and I went to a movie as scheduled. After purchasing the tickets and drinks, we entered the cinema with delight beforehand, waiting for the beginning of the movie.

When I got up in the middle of the movie, Emmett whispered, “ Carter, where are you going?” “I forgot to call my mom to tell her what time to pick us up.” I whispered back, leaving my jacket on the seat.

I squeezed past the people in my row, trying not to step on any feet while still watching the screen. I didn’t want to miss a thing. Balfour, the good guy in the movie, was trapped in an underground cave.

When I came back, Balfour’s flashlight almost went out. An enormous snake was moving toward him, twisting its body. Balfour struggled to loosen the chains around his hands and feet to reach his magic cape (魔法斗篷). With the cape around him, he could completely disappear.

I crawled (緩慢行進) back across eight people (I counted on the way out), never taking my eyes off the screen. I sat down in my seat slowly, then picked up my drink, and swallowed it quickly. But suddenly my brain said, “That’s not coke. That’s lemonade.” I looked down at the cup, just as the girl next to me shouted, “He drank my lemonade!”

“Shhhh!” the people around us said, making quiet complaints.

“Where’s Emmett?” I asked, as if the girl had hidden him under her seat.

“Carter, down here,” Emmett answered in a low voice. He was two rows ahead of me. I was in the wrong row! Everyone was turning around to look at me.

“Here,” I said, handing the girl her drink.

“Eww,” she said. “You have had a drink of it, so you owe me a lemonade.”

“Shhhh!” everyone said again.

“OK, OK,” I said, starting my crawl across eight sets of feet again. Everybody were complaining as I inched out.

“Don’t come back,” the boy on the end said.

注意:

1. 所續寫短文的詞數應為 150 左右；

2. 至少使用 5 個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；

3. 續寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4. 續寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。

Paragraph 1

But the problem was that I had to come back to bring this girl a new lemonade.

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Paragraph 2

I thought about crawling out of this row and back into Emmett’s row, but I couldn’t.

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Answer 1

【答案】But the problem was that I had to come back to bring this girl a new lemonade. I bought a lemonade, took a deep breath, and went back. This time, I bent low, looking at every person on the end of each row. When I saw the same boy, I moved through fast to get back to that girl. Unfortunately, I stepped on a boy’s feet and banged my knee. After apologized to him, I quickly fell into the seat next to the girl and handed her the lemonade. Everyone around us all turned to stare at me again with some complaints.

I thought about crawling out of this row and back into Emmett’s row, but I couldn’t. Maybe I would just stay there until the movie ended. Thanking me for the lemonade, the girl talked about the plots I missed. I whispered back, “Thanks.” When the lights of the cinema came on, I grabbed my jacket on the seat and hurried out. Emmett caught up with me, “Do you know that girl?” “No.” I answered. “Then why do you have her jacket?” I looked down and found a bright pink jacket. “Here I go again,” I said with embarrassment, spotting the girl in the crowd.

【解析】

這是一篇讀后續寫。周五晚上，作者和埃米特按計劃去看了一場電影，在看電影期間作者去給媽媽打電話，回來了作者發現自己做錯了座位，還誤喝了一個女孩的檸檬水。

1.第一段給出的首句是But the problem was that I had to come back to bring this girl a new lemonade.這一句是故事發展的轉折點。可以從“我買了一杯檸檬水，深吸了一口氣，走了回去。這一次，我彎下腰，看著每一行末尾的每一個人。還是踩到了一個男孩的腳，迅速坐到女孩旁邊的座位上，遞給她檸檬水。周圍的人都轉過頭來，抱怨著又盯著作者看。——無論從何角度拓展，需注意與續寫第二段首句呼應。

2.第二段所給首句I thought about crawling out of this row and back into Emmett’s row, but I couldn’t.這一句呼應前文，緊接著可以從“也許我會一直呆在那里直到電影結束。這時要續寫女孩談到了作者錯過的情節。作者低聲說：“謝謝。”當電影院的燈亮了，作者抓起座位上的夾克就匆匆出去了。埃米特追上作者，“你認識那個女孩嗎？“沒有。”作者回答。“那你為什么拿她的夾克？“作者低頭一看，發現了一件亮粉色的夾克衫。“作者很尷尬，在人群中看到了那個女孩。