Question

每年暑假，各種機構紛紛組織形式多樣的夏令營，如英語夏令營、減肥夏令營等等。 家長們踴躍送孩子去參加。請通過這一現(xiàn)象用英語寫一篇短文，來說明家長們此舉的原因， 并表明自己對夏令營的著法。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)120左右
2. 列舉的原因不得少于兩個
3. 參考詞匯：summer camp

Answer 1

Every summer vacation witnesses a series of camps organized by different institutions, such as English camps, weight-losing camps, and so on, which abundantly draws/ attracts parents’ attention.
The reasons behind can be concluded as follows. To begin with, summer is absolutely a right time for children to broaden their horizons and strengthen their basis of different subjects. Meanwhile, in some parents’ opinion, it is far better to keep their children occupied than to leave them at home having nothing to do.
As far as I am concerned, mostly the participation of summer camps does benefit children. However, there is no need for all parents to copy something blindly. They might as well cope with it sensibly. Otherwise, negative effects won’t be avoided in terms of time, study habit, or growth.

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