Question

14．假如你是李華．你的兩位朋友Tom與Peter幾天前發生了爭吵．3月9日是Peter生日，Tom想送他一個禮物來緩和關系，他特地發來郵件尋求你的建議．請你根據以下要點給Tom回一封郵件，信的內容包括：
1．推薦一個禮物；
2．你的理由；
3．其他和解建議．
注意：
1．詞數100左右；
2．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3．郵件的開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數．
Dear Tom，
I'm glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter．
If I were you，I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him．
As far as I know，Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body．In the meanwhile，you can often go outing by bike together，which is helpful to rebuild your friendship．Besides，taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport．It's convenient for him to get around as well．
Apart from giving him a gift，you can also adopt other means，such as travelling，seeing a movie，having dinner and going shopping．No matter what you do，being sincere is the most important．I really hope that we can be good friends forever．
yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
If I were you，I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him．
如果我是你，我會考慮把自行車作為生日禮物送給他．
高分句型二：
In the meanwhile，you can often go outing by bike together，which is helpful to rebuild your friendship．
同時，你們可以經常去騎自行車一起郊游，這有助于重建你們的友誼．

解答 Dear Tom，
     I'm glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter．If I were you，I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him．（高分句型一）
     As far as I know，Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body．In the meanwhile，you can often go outing by bike together，which is helpful to rebuild your friendship（高分句型二）．Besides，taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport．It's convenient for him to get around as well．
   Apart from giving him a gift，you can also adopt other means，such as travelling，seeing a movie，having dinner and going shopping．No matter what you do，being sincere is the most important．I really hope that we can be good friends forever．
                                                                                                          Yours，
                                                                                                          Li Hua

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯想，自由發揮．不僅考查學生在內容、結構安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．