Question

法國(guó)哲學(xué)家盧梭說(shuō)過(guò)：“No Thanksgiving would be no virtue”（沒(méi)有感恩就沒(méi)有真正的美德。）如今社會(huì)上一些人缺乏感恩之心，少數(shù)人甚至在父母年老體弱時(shí)都不愿意贍養(yǎng)。

    請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際，談幾點(diǎn)父母值得你感恩的地方，以及將來(lái)你會(huì)做些什么來(lái)報(bào)答父母的養(yǎng)育之恩。

注意：

1．短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總數(shù)。

    2．字?jǐn)?shù)100字左右。（感恩-thanksgiving）

    Not only do our parents give us life, but they also give us endless love and support, always sharing our happiness and sorrow.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Not only do our parents give us life, but also give us endless love, always sharing our happiness and sorrow.

I am very grateful to my parents. they give me so much love and spare no efforts to support me .i still remember once I was seriously ill, they were so worried and almost kept me company the whole day. Now I am in senior3. Luckily my parents can understand my stressful condition and often communicate with me with encouraging words. Furthermore, they give enough personal space, which I appreciate so much.

What I should do now is study hard .when I grow up, I will try my best to make my parents live a happy life.

【解析】這是一篇觀點(diǎn)類(lèi)作文，內(nèi)容貼近考生的生活，具有時(shí)代性和可寫(xiě)性。要求考生就感恩這個(gè)話題談?wù)劯改钢档酶卸鞯牡胤剑�以及具體回報(bào)父母養(yǎng)育之恩的做法，考生需要根據(jù)自己的生活經(jīng)歷，找出一些切實(shí)可行的方法，在寫(xiě)的過(guò)程中注意高級(jí)詞匯和句型的使用，關(guān)聯(lián)詞的使用，可以為文章增色不少。