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17．綠色食品在人們的生活中變得越來越受歡迎，你們班就"人們是否應該吃綠色食品"進行了討論．請你根據下表內容，寫一篇文章，將你們的討論結果發表在某英文報上．

65%支持吃綠色食品	1．綠色食品種植、生產過程都是在無污染的環境下進行的； 2．綠色食品不含對人體有害的農藥．
35%不支持吃綠色食品	1．綠色食品生產成高，價格較高； 2．綠色食品多數大超市出售，購買不是很方便．
你的觀點	…

注意：1．詞數100左右；2．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫．
Should People Eat Green Food？
Recently our class had a discussion about whether people should eat green food．
About 65% of the students believe people should eat green food，since the environment isn't polluted in the process of production．（高分句型一）Also，it is produced without harmful chemicals，making it safer to eat．（高分句型二）
But 35% of the students think people shouldn't eat green food，since it is much more expensive．What's more，most green food is sold in big supermarkets，making it inconvenient to buy．（高分句型三）
In my opinion，people should eat green food if they can afford it．Why would they want to risk making themselves sick？．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來．動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題．本作文中給出的要點比較具體，故需要準確表達．寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化．平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果 
【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語What's more而且；In my opinion在我看來；risk doing 冒險做某事；Recently our class had a discussion on whether people should eat green food這個句子wheither引導on的賓語從句； Also，it is produced without harmful chemicals，making it safe to eat．這個句子making做伴隨狀語； 
About 65% of the students believe people should eat green food，since the environment isn't polluted in the process of production．（高分句型一）
Also，it is produced without harmful chemicals，making it safer to eat．（高分句型二）
What's more，most green food is sold in big supermarkets，making it inconvenient to buy．（高分句型三）

解答 Should People Eat Green Food？
      Recently our class had a discussion about whether people should eat green food．
      About 65% of the students believe people should eat green food，since the environment isn't polluted in the process of production．（高分句型一）Also，it is produced without harmful chemicals，making it safer to eat．（高分句型二）
       But 35% of the students think people shouldn't eat green food，since it is much more expensive．What's more，most green food is sold in big supermarkets，making it inconvenient to buy．（高分句型三）
      In my opinion，people should eat green food if they can afford it．Why would they want to risk making themselves sick？

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．