Question

【題目】假如你叫李華，你的外國筆友Tom對中國功夫很感興趣。他給你發來電子郵件，告訴你想在暑假期間來中國的少林寺學習少林功夫，體驗中國文化。請根據下面提示，給Tom寫一封電子郵件。內容包括：

1.歡迎他來中國；

2.介紹如何到達河南登封：坐飛機到鄭州新鄭機場，再坐汽車到少林寺；

3.如何選擇所學課程；

4.其他建議。

注意：1.詞數100左右；

2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和格式己為你寫好，不計入總詞數。

Dear Tom，

I'm glad to know that you are coming to China

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I’m glad to know that you are coming to China to learn Shaolin kung fu.I’m writing to offer you some advice.

As you know,Shaolin Temple is located in Dengfeng,Henan Province,which is famous for Chinese kung fu. When you come to China,the destination of your flight should be Zhengzhou Xinzheng International Airport,which is in the suburb of Zhengzhou,the capital of Henan Province.

Then you can take a bus to Shaolin Temple.There are all kinds of short courses for you to choose from,so you can visit the website for detailed information.

Remember that it is hard to practice Chinese kung fu,especially in the beginning.And the life seems boring because you have to practice all the time.

If you need further information,please let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一封電子郵件。你的外國筆友Tom告訴你想在暑假期間來中國的少林寺學習少林功夫，體驗中國文化。請根據下面提示，給Tom回寫一封電子郵件。內容包括：歡迎他來中國；介紹如何到達河南登封：坐飛機到鄭州新鄭機場，再坐汽車到少林寺；如何選擇所學課程；其他建議。寫作時把所提示的點寫全，但不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節以使行文連貫，同時注意準確運用時態、語態。適當使用并列連詞，合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點說明】

本文是一封電子郵件，格式正確，要點齊全，重點突出，結構布局合理，文中使用高級句子。As you know,Shaolin Temple is located in Dengfeng,Henan Province,which is famous for Chinese kung fu.句中as和which引導非限制性定語從句；When you come to China,the destination of your flight should be Zhengzhou Xinzheng International Airport,---，when引導時間狀語從句；Remember that it is hard to practice Chinese kung fu,especially in the beginning.祈使句和賓語從句完美結合；And the life seems boring because you have to practice all the time.句中because引導原因狀語從句；If you need further information,please let me know.if條件句使用巧妙。