Question

請根據提示以”My English Teacher”為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。
包括：某老師是一位年輕教師，她/他教英語，教學態度認真，對工作和學生要求很嚴格，耐心幫助班里的學生。她/他幫助你提高了英語成績。

Answer 1

One Possible Version：
My English Teacher
Mr. Sun is one of my belove teachers. He is a young teacher. He teaches us English very well. His classes are lively and interesting. He makes good preparations for his lessons and is strict in his works as well as with his students. Whenever we make mistakes in our homework, he will ask us to correct and read it. I used to be poor in English. Mr. Sun often helps me with my study very patiently. Thanks to his help, I have made much progress and caught up with others. I appreciate him for his help and will remember him forever.

試題分析：本文是一篇提綱作文。寫作時首先要仔細審題，確定人稱，時態，文體。內容要點要全面，上下段要使用連接詞做到連貫。我們在寫作中應當用盡可能少的形式表達盡可能多的語義內容，力求簡潔精練。根據提示內容，寫出所列要點，要全面。我們在用詞上應該仔細揣摩，準確清晰地表達我們的思想，剔除冗詞贅語，使文章言簡意賅。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如：makes good preparations for, be poor in ，made much progress and caught up with others.等。還運用了狀語從句Whenever we make mistakes in our homework,等。并注意了句子的銜接如：Whenever，as well as，Thanks to 等。
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