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我最喜歡的老師

作為一名中學生，你遇到過許多好的老師，你最喜歡的老師是誰？請以My favorite teacher為題，寫一篇短文。題目和開頭已為你寫好。

My favorite teacher

In my high school, I have many good teachers, but my English teacher, Mr. Liu, who is about forty yours old, is the one I particularly like and respect.

 

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【答案】

 

My favorite teacher

In my high school, I have many good teachers, but my English teacher, Mr. Liu, who is about forty yours old, is the one I particularly like and respect.

He is kind but very strict and has a very special way of teaching. At the beginning of every class, he always tells us some interesting English stories to attract our attention and to make us interested in English. He is so humorous and experienced in teaching that he can make his lessons lively and interesting. When the bell rings to dismiss the class I always feel a bit sorry.

Mr. Liu teaches us how to write in simple, clear and correct English and to make ourselves understood to English speaking people. He takes a personal interest in each of us and has made a deep impression on us all.

Since Mr. Liu began to teach me English I have made rapid progress. I respect him and decide to choose teaching as my career.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇開放式作文。它的寫作思路與漢語作文非常相似。首先要明確主題，然后根據主題搭建文章的主體結構，即寫作提綱。提綱要突出主題，有層次，先寫什么，后寫什么要有安排。

本文要求以“我最喜歡的老師”為題寫一篇文章，屬一篇寫人的記敘文。寫的對象是老師，那么老師受學生喜歡一般來說源于兩個方面。一、人品、個性、人格魅力，二、教學方面。大方向確定好以后，可以回憶一些描寫人物的詞句，然后進行組織。

寫作時要注意文章的時態，如果寫現在的老師 ，則用現在的各種時態，寫曾經的老師則要用過去的各種時態。

由于自由度較大，寫作時一定要注意緊緊圍繞主題。

【亮點說明】

1、文章語言簡潔清楚，表達時還又不泛一些較為精彩的句型，如：He is so humorous and experienced in teaching that he can make his lessons lively and interesting.此處的so… that…句型用得恰到好處。

2、情感色彩鮮明。When the bell rings to dismiss the class I always feel a bit sorry.此句一看就知作者是多么地喜歡這個老師。

3、最后一段寫了這位老師對我的影響大到我決定將來也做老師，更可看出這篇文章緊緊圍繞主題。

考點：開放性作文