Question

假如你是新華中學的學生李華，偶然看到在你市求學的美國學生Tom在網上發帖，要大家給他推薦一本學習漢語的書。你手頭正好有一本合適的書可以借給他。請你給他發一封電子郵件，要點如下：

1．說明寫信原因；

2．描述書的情況；

3．約定見面時間和地點。

注意：

1.詞數：120 -150；

2．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

Dear Tom,

I'm Ii Hua, a student of Xinhua Middle School._______________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes.

Yours

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Tom,

I’m Li Hua, a student of Xinhua Middle School. The other day, I learned quite by chance that you were in need of a book to help you improve your Chinese. I happen to have one, which I think might help you.

The book, entitled New Practical Chinese, is intended for beginners at your level. Not only does it include the basic conversations in our daily life, it is also a window through which you can get to know Chinese culture and customs. Edited by three language experts, it has been popular with the readers ever since it came out two years ago.

If it is convenient to you, let’s meet at 3 pm. this Sunday at the entrance to the People’s Park, where I can give you the book face to face. If not, try to find another time that is suitable for both of us.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是書信類作文，要求用英語給湯姆發一封電子郵，給他推薦一本學習漢語的書。文章的要點也基本上都給出來了，但不是很具體，考生要把要點全交代，不能有遺漏。而且要拓展內容，在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強調句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。因為是書信，所以本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔。

【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，應用了一些較好的詞組： The other day“幾天前”, by chance“偶然”. be intended for “意圖是”。還有一個很大的特點，這篇文章的句型多變，也適當應用了高中所學的重點語法知識： I happen to have one, which I think might help you.這句話用了定語從句， The book, entitled New Practical Chinese, is intended for beginners at your level. 這句話用來了過去分詞做定語，Not only does it include the basic conversations in our daily life, it is also a window through which you can get to know Chinese culture and customs. 這句話用了定語從句和倒裝句，Edited by three language experts, it has been popular with the readers ever since it came out two years ago. 這句話用了過去分詞做狀語， If it is convenient to you, let’s meet at 3 pm. this Sunday at the entrance to the People’s Park, where I can give you the book face to face.這句話用了定語從句， If not, try to find another time that is suitable for both of us.

這句話用了省略句。

考點：考查書信類書面表達