Question

假設你是李華，你在加拿大的筆友Tim得知作為高三的學生，你每天在學校要學習到八點半，他感到驚訝和不解。請你給Tim寫封110字左右的回信，介紹情況并談談你對此的看法。回信應包括以下要點：

同學們看法不一。

贊成者認為，學校的學習氛圍很好，遇到問題還可以馬上與同學和老師交流。

反對者認為，學校的學習條件不如家里舒適，學習時容易受到別人的干擾。

說明你的觀點和理由。

注意：開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入字數。

Dear Tim,

I hope everything is fine with you.

Your letter came to me this morning. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Take good care of yourself and write often.

Yours,

                                          Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Tim,

I hope everything is fine with you.

Your letter came to me this morning. It’s really hard for a foreign student to understand this rule that we should stay at school until 8:30 pm every day.

As far as I know, my fellow students react to it differently. Defenders think there’s a good study atmosphere at school, and besides, they’re able to communicate with their classmates and teachers whenever they come across any problem. Critics, however, find it more comfortable to study at home. Even worse, in their opinion, they tend to get disturbed at school.

Personally, I agree that the rule has ensured the efficiency of my study. Anyway, I sometimes can’t concentrate while studying at home.

Take good care of yourself and write often.

Yours，

Li Hua

解析:

文筆要非常流暢，要把握所有要點，同時以“我”為中心，詳細說明自己對志愿者工作的理解，以此來表達自己的決心。要用詞恰當，表現要比較充分，具備一定的說服力。詞匯和語句的運用要正確。