Question

近來(lái)你們學(xué)校正準(zhǔn)備創(chuàng)建和申報(bào)“省綠色學(xué)校”請(qǐng)你據(jù)此給某英文報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇短文。

內(nèi)容包括 ：1. 建設(shè)綠色校園的重要性。

2. 綠色校園不僅是指綠色的環(huán)境，……

3. 為了建設(shè)綠色校園我們應(yīng)該……

注意： 1、詞數(shù)120左右

2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫

3、開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Recently, our school is aiming at building a green campus. What is a green school?

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently, our school is aiming at building a green campus. What is a green school? It means not only a green campus, but a "green" atmosphere for our study and life.

For one thing, a green campus means more plants, less pollution and no waste. Each of us can do something, such as planting trees and flowers or just saving electricity and water in our daily life. It will make a big difference. For another thing, it is necessary for us students to make great efforts to create a harmonious atmosphere of mutual trust and respect between teachers and students. Besides, it is important to keep a friendly

and supportive attitude towards each other.

Accordingly, if everyone does one thing for our school, we'll surely turn our school into a better one.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。