Question

假定你是李華，亞洲冬季運動會將在你居住的地方舉辦，現在正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請按要求用英文給組委會寫一封申請信，內容應包括：

個人情況：年齡、性別、學歷

個人條件：英語好、愛好體育、善于交往、樂于助人、熟悉本地情況。

承諾：提供最佳服務

注意：

詞數100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

生詞：申請 apply（v.）,application (n.);志愿者 volunteer

Dear Sir /Madam,

My name is LiHua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

My name is LiHua .I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.

I am a girl of 18.As a college student, I have a keen interest in sports and I have always been looking forward to the games to be held here.

With the great fluency in English and the passion for sports, I suppose I am qualified to be a volunteer for the Games. Besides, I have a good communicative competence and I am considered to be an outgoing, reliable and helpful person at college. What’s more,, I am familiar with the local conditions. I promise I will offer the best service to whoever participates in the games.

Now I formally apply for the job and I sincerely hope I can be accepted.

Yours faithfully,

LiHua

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達是要求寫一封申請信，類似于自我介紹，學生應該很容易把握寫作要求。考生在寫作之前必須認真審題，首先要注意文章的時態，申請信要求介紹自己情況，所以要用一般現在時，當然也必須用第一人稱。寫作時不要根據材料逐字翻譯，應該注意細節的補充以及文章結構上的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。

【亮點說明】文章格式正確，要點全面。不僅As a college student;  with the great fluency in English and passion for sports，be familiar with， participates in ，apply for， 等短語使句子更為簡潔生動，而且keen，qualified，等高級詞匯的使用也使文章錦上添花，好的句子有：I promise I will offer the best service to whoever participates in the games.此外Besides ，What’s more 等插入語也讓上下文銜接更為緊湊，讀起來朗朗上口。

考點：考查提綱類作文。