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4．假設你是李華，校英文報舉行題為"我最喜歡的幽默大師---卓別林"的征文比賽，請你投稿參賽．
要點：
1．簡要介紹卓別林；
2．談談你喜歡他的原因．
要求：
行文流暢，適當添加細節，字數100左右．
Charlie Chaplin，master of nonverbal humor，was born into a poor family．When he was young，his father died，leaving the family even worse off．Therefore，Charlie had to take the responsibility to care for his mother and brother．Even if he led a hard life，he managed to brighten the life of other people and created many famous characters，such as the littletramp，who encouraged many people in need．（高分句型一）
The reasons why I likeChaplin best are listed as follows．（高分句型二）Firstly，he worked hard to achieve his dream．Secondly，he had a sense of humor and was good at making a bad situation entertaining．What's more，his attitude towards life and determination to overcome difficulties always inspire me whenever I am in trouble．（高分句型三）
In general，I have learnt a lot from Charlie Chaplin．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇人物類命題作文．聯系題干，以此為中心內容進行選材．考生在寫這篇文章時，要注意以下幾點：
1．要分析題干，圍繞題干進行選材，在寫作思路方面，題目要求寫幽默大師卓別林，所以我們可以將他的外形、性格還有代表作簡要介紹一下．
2．要點要齊全，將題目要求的內容羅列完整，重點對他進行簡要介紹并列明喜歡他的主要原因，要注意層次結構，注意上下文的銜接．
3．注意時態與語態，全文以一般現在時為主，描述第三人時要注意動詞形態的使用．
【范文亮點】


1．文章采用了have to do sth不得不做某事；take the responsibility擔負責任；manage to do設法做成某事；the reason why…的原因；等高級表達；
2．文章采用了"Therefore、In general、What's more、Even if"等連接詞使文章更加層次，連貫通順．
3．who encouraged many people in need，在句中，出現了who引導的定語從句．
Even if he led a hard life，he managed to brighten the life of other people and created many famous characters，such as the little tramp，who encouraged many people in need．（高分句型一）
The reasons why I like Chaplin best are listed as follows．（高分句型二）
What's more，his attitude towards life and determination to overcome difficulties always inspire me whenever I am in trouble．（高分句型三）

解答 Charlie Chaplin，master of nonverbal humor，was born into a poor family．When he was young，his father died，leaving the family even worse off．Therefore，Charlie had to take the responsibility to care for his mother and brother．Even if he led a hard life，he managed to brighten the life of other people and created many famous characters，such as the little tramp，who encouraged many people in need．（高分句型一）
      The reasons why I like Chaplin best are listed as follows．（高分句型二）Firstly，he worked hard to achieve his dream．Secondly，he had a sense of humor and was good at making a bad situation entertaining．What's more，his attitude towards life and determination to overcome difficulties always inspire me whenever I am in trouble．（高分句型三）
       In general，I have learnt a lot from Charlie Chaplin．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．