Question

目前，父母對孩子的生活、學習等方面包辦現象非常普遍。請你描述這一現象以及帶來的弊端，根據提示用英語寫一篇短文。

1．分析該現象的原因；  2．你的建議（至少兩方面 ）

注意：

1．詞數100左右。         2．可適當增加細節。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Today in China, it’s not surprising that children get too much attention and some parents nearly do everything for their children.

Gradually, some of them get used to depending on their parents and lack the ability to solve problems independently. It’s believed that the increasing number of single-child families under the Family Policy accounts for this phenomenon.

To solve this problem, I suggest parents act as a guide to give children a right direction and other things are left to children because it is too much love that makes the children’s inability. As for children, they should do everything they can by themselves instead of waiting to get things done for no parents can accompany them forever. Only an independent person can live and succeed in this world.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇開發性作文，對考生的要求非常高，需要考生有較強的組織語言的能力和運用語言的功底。本文的話題是考生所熟悉的，具有可寫性。在寫作之前，注意謀篇布局，文章應該是三段，第一段提及這種現象，第二段談弊端，第三段分析原因提出建議。在寫作時要注意選詞如independently，Gradually，accompany等高級詞匯的運用。同時運用合適的連接詞和句型。最后要注意對文章的潤色。

【亮點說明】it’s not surprising that children get too much attention and some parents nearly do everything for their children.這句話用了it做形式主語，Gradually, some of them get used to depending on their parents and lack the ability to solve problems independently. 這句話用了get used to doing詞組，It’s believed that the increasing number of single-child families under the Family Policy accounts for this phenomenon. 這句話用了It’s believed that ….句型，和account for這樣的高級詞組， To solve this problem, I suggest parents act as a guide to give children a right direction and other things are left to children because it is too much love that makes the children’s inability. 這句話用了不定式做目的狀語，As for children, they should do everything they can by themselves instead of waiting to get things done for no parents can accompany them forever. 這句話里面的they can是定語從句，Only an independent person can live and succeed in this world.這句話用了倒裝句。

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