Question

假如你是李華， 你的加拿大筆友Bob 來信談到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家鄉(xiāng)瑞安的情況。請你用英語寫一封回信。回信須包括下表中的內(nèi)容：

自然情況	1. 位于飛云江畔，風景優(yōu)美，適合居住
成就	2. 經(jīng)濟發(fā)展迅速  3. 新建了許多工廠，住房，道路等。
存在問題	4. 水，空氣污染 5. 交通擁擠
對瑞安發(fā)展的看法	6. （內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定）

 注意：詞數(shù)： 100左右。信的開頭與結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯： 經(jīng)濟economy
Dear Bob,
It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown, Rui’an City.

Answer 1

Dear Bob,
It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown, Ruian City.
Ruian is located on the Fei Yun River. With its beautiful scenery, it is a suitable place for people to live in. The economy has been developing in the past twenty years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people.
However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.
In my opinion, the city should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of the private cars should be brought under control so that we’ll have a better hometown in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua

這是一篇應用文寫作，寫一封信。給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。寫作前先結合要表達的事情確定句子的人稱時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。注意寫作中的時態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語言要準確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。