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It was my 18th birthday yesterday. As the age is special for our teenagers, so my parents held a birthday party for me at home. With my parents and some of my good friends attend my birthday party, I really had unforgettable experience. We sang songs, dancing and played games together. We all enjoyed ourselves very much. During the party, my parent told me that from then on I was no longer a child and an adult. They also said I should be more independent and responsibly. Hearing their words, I was greatly encouraged. It was just in that moment when I felt I was a grown-up

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It was my 18th birthday yesterday. As the age is special for our (us)  us 與teenagers 是同位語 teenagers, so (去掉 so ) 此處為主句my parents held a birthday party for me at home. With my parents and some of my good friends attend (attending) 此處作狀語，用在with后，用doing my birthday party, I really had (加an ) experience此處指的是經歷，可數名詞 unforgettable experience. We sang songs, dancing (danced) 作并列謂語，and played games together. We all enjoyed ourselves very much. During the party, my parent (parents) 父母是兩個人，要選用復數told me that from then on I was no longer a child and (but)not..but 結構，意為我不再是一個孩子了，而是一個大人了 an adult. They also said I should be more independent and responsibly (responsible)此處與independent是并列關系，作表語. Hearing their words, I was greatly encouraged. It was just in (at)常用搭配 that moment when (that)強調句 I felt I was a grown-up. ]

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