Question

根據下列提示寫一篇日記, 記錄下你一天的活動和感受。

上周四和周五年級組織了本期的第一次考試。你考得不好，心情郁悶。

星期五晚上幾個同學邀你去KTV唱歌，那天晚上你們玩得十分開心，增強了自信，你知道了：失敗是成功之母，并有了今后的打算。

注意：

1. 詞數：100左右

2. 日記必須包括所有要點，但不要逐句翻譯，可以增加細節，使短文完整。

3. 日記的開頭已寫好。

參考詞匯： microphone 麥克風

Friday Nov. 26, 2010                                   Sunny

On Thursday and Friday last week our grade organized a test. That evening I went to the KTV with a few classmates.

                                                                            

                                                                            

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Friday Nov. 26, 2010                                  Sunny

On Thursday and Friday last week our grade organized a test. That evening I went to the KTV with a few classmates.

It was the first test this term in our grade. I was in a bad mood after the test because I didn’t do well in the test, especially in English. At the KTV, everybody was in high spirits. Each sang his favorite songs. At the beginning, I was only one of the audience, listening to their songs. After a while, I joined them, picked up the microphone and sang my favorite songs. Some were singing while others were dancing. We had a wonderful time. Soon I forgot my worry.

I have become cheerful now. Above all I’ve gained self-confidence. Failure is the mother of success. I shouldn’t lose heart just because of one or two failures. I still have many chances to try.

【解析】本文是一篇日記，考生在審題時一定要注意時態，應該使用一般現在時。日記的要點基本上都已經給出了，考生只需要按照時間的順序翻譯成英語即可。在寫作的過程中需要注意使用合適的時間順序的連接詞，讓文章成為一個有序的整體，也要注意使用高級的詞匯和高級的句型，讓文章更有特點。在最后一段可以適當的作一些發揮。