Question

假設你正在參加全省中學生英語演講比賽,請你針對有些父母經常翻看孩子日記或書包這一現象,寫一篇演講稿,陳述你的觀點。演講稿的主要內容應包括：認為同學們不必為此苦惱；希望能夠體諒父母的苦衷；建議與父母進行交流和溝通。注意：1. 詞數120左右；2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫；3. 開頭和結尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數。

Good morning, ladies and gentleman.

Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our schoolbags or read our diaries _____________________________________________________________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.

Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but there’s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into any trouble. They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are dong it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around—they are bound to read it.

Thank you!

【解析】本文是一篇演講稿，也是一篇半開放性的作文。所涉及內容與學生的生活實際聯系緊密，學生有話可說，在寫之前，要仔細謀篇布局，陳述現象，提出自己的建議。要選擇高級詞匯如comfortable，be bound to do sth，也要使用高級的句型，如there’s no need to do sth;個人建議部分可以建議使用信件等。