Question

書面表達(dá) （滿分25分）

假如你是校報(bào)負(fù)責(zé)人，急需在學(xué)校內(nèi)聘一位同學(xué)任英文版的編輯。請(qǐng)你用英文以“An English Editor Wanted”為題目寫一則招聘啟事。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 該工作主要包括兩部分：一是從英文報(bào)刊雜志及互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上選擇適合學(xué)生的文章；二是選擇與編輯同學(xué)們的來稿。

2. 希望該同學(xué)滿足下列要求：

a. 樂意奉獻(xiàn)出一些業(yè)余時(shí)間為同學(xué)們服務(wù);

b. 英文與美術(shù)皆好；能熟練使用電腦；

c. 感興趣的同學(xué)請(qǐng)?jiān)诒局軆?nèi)與學(xué)生會(huì)（Students’ Union）聯(lián)系。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 不要逐字翻譯， 要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。

An English Editor Wanted

Our school newspaper is looking for an editor for its English edition…….

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

Students’ Union

 

Answer 1

【答案】

An English Editor Wanted

Our school newspaper is looking for an editor for its English edition.The job mainly includes two parts: One is to choose proper English articles from other newspapers, magazines or the Internet for us students.The other is to pick out articles from students in our school and edit them for use.

We hope that he/she could meet the following requirements. First, he/she is willing to devote some of the spare time to serving the others. Second, it’s necessary for him/her to be good at both English and fine art. Needless to say that the ability to use the computer is important as well.

Those who are interested in the job, please get in touch with the Students’ Union this week.

Students’ Union

【解析】

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文的寫作。要求描述廣告里的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，要點(diǎn)包括：工作范圍，招聘要求，鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生參加等，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。還需要自己組織語(yǔ)言，注意分段，不能一片到頭只有一段。注意控制字?jǐn)?shù)，盡量使用復(fù)合句和高級(jí)詞匯。象范文的Needless to say that the ability to use the computer is important as well還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來，象first,second等詞，這樣文章顯得更連貫。

考點(diǎn)：考查書信類短文寫作。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。