Question

書面表達（共1小題，滿分15分）

假如你是高二學(xué)生黎明。最近，某英文報刊正在進行“怎樣才算是一名好學(xué)生”的討論。現(xiàn)在，請你用英語給該報編輯寫封信，從以下方面談?wù)勀銓Υ嗽掝}的看法。

1.校內(nèi)表現(xiàn)（尊敬老師、遵守校規(guī)、學(xué)習(xí)刻苦）；

2.校外表現(xiàn)（愛父母、做家務(wù)、做好公民）；

3.身體心智（健康）；

4.生活態(tài)度（積極）

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100字左右。

2. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。

3. 書寫清晰、工整

Dear editor,

I am Li Ming, a senior two student.____________________________________

                                                                       

                                                                       

                                                                       

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Best Regards

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear editor,

I am Li Ming, a senior two student. ①I’m writing to tell you what a good student should be like.

②In my opinion, a good student should respect his teachers and get on well with others. He should be hard-working and obey the school rules. ③While at home, he loves his parents and help them with some housework whenever needed. Once in a public place, he must be a good citizen. He shouldn’t do anything that is against the law or any other regulations. ④But the most important thing is that he must be healthy physically and mentally. ⑤Finally, a good student should not only care about study, but also hold an active attitude towards life.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Best regards.                                    

Your sincerely,

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶āＰ枰�注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字數(shù)，不要太多也不要太少。

考點：提綱作文

點評：本文屬于提綱作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。