Question

假設你在某本雜志中“我愛讀書”系列漫畫里看到了下面這幅漫畫。請在日記中描述這幅漫畫，并談談你所受到的啟迪。

注意：1. 字數要求：不少于120字。

2. 文中除了粽子可用漢語拼音外，其余詞必須用英語描述。

3. 參考詞匯：解開（包裝紙等）unwrap

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Answer 1

范文：

Sunny                                        Thursday   October 15, 2009  

This morning when I read a magazine, I was deeply impressed by a series of cartoons with the theme of ‘I love reading’. Among them, the following is the most attractive to me.

In the cartoon, a man is sitting at a table on which there is a plate full of Zongzi, a kind of Chinese traditional food for the Dragon Boat Festival, and a cup. Somehow it seems that he is at a loss to eat them. Believe it or not, he just finds a book on How to unwrap Zongzi and carefully reads it instead of trying himself.

As students, we are learning by reading almost every day. It is true that books can tell us a lot and teach us how to deal with some problems. However, there are also some other ways of gaining knowledge, including the way of learning by doing. Isn’t it better to try unwrapping these Zongzi than to read a book telling you how to do it? As the saying goes, ‘Theory comes from practice’.

解析:

本文是一篇看圖文章，需要注意以下幾點

1.內容一定要包括以下兩點：描述這幅漫畫和談談你所受到的啟迪

2.要注意日記的格式，用第一人稱，部分用一般過去時，但是描述圖片部分和發表自己的見解部分要用一般現在時。