Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Sandy arrived at the museum at last. She was so tired that she has to find a chair to sit on. If she sat down, she noticed nice painting on the wall. She stared with it for a long time--- such long, that she fell asleep.

Suddenly, she felt a tap on his shoulder. She looked up and saw a man on a horse wear a metal suit. He was only a sculpture a moment ago, but by now he was alive and talking to Sandy! She was so frightening that she ran down the hall.

From around the corner she could hear someone singing. She went to see what it was but there was nobody in sight.

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】本文是一篇記敘短文。講述了Sandy進入博物館后坐在椅子上睡著了，發現有人在拍她，她就看到博物館的雕像變成了活人和她說話，她嚇著跑出去，等再回去看時發現并沒有人在那兒。

“She was so tired that she has to find a chair to sit on”,根據was,可知此句為過去時態，前后時態應保持一致。故將has改為had。

2.“If she sat down, she noticed nice painting on the wall”聯系前后句，此處應該引領時間狀語從句。故將If改為Once或者When或者After。

3. she noticed nice painting on the wall.根據painting用的是單數可知，此處指的是墻上的一幅畫。故添加a。

4.“ She stared with it for a long time”，“stare at盯著，凝視”，固定用法，沒有“stare with”這個短語。故將with改為at。

5.“ such long”,so用來修飾形容詞或副詞，such用來修飾名詞，此句中long為形容詞。故將such改為so。

6.“she felt a tap on his shoulder”，由前文可看出Sandy是女生，his是he的物主代詞，her是she的物主代詞。故將his改為her。

7.“She looked up and saw a man on a horse wear a metal suit”, wear與 a horse是主動的關系，所以用現在分詞作定語。也可以把a man on a horse wear a metal suit是作動詞saw的賓語從句，由語境可知用一般過去時；故將wear改為wearing或wore。

8.“but by now he was alive and talking to Sandy”，“by now到目前為止，現如今”，一般會和現在完成時連用。此處強調的是“現在”，應該用now。故刪去by。

9.“She was so frightening that she ran down the hall”，“frightening令人懼怕的”主要用于修飾物，“frightened害怕的”主要用于修飾人。故將frightening改為frightened。

10.“She went to see what it was but there was nobody in sight”,根據nobody可知，此處和人物有關，她想去看看它是誰而不是它是什么。故將what改為who。