Question

假設你是某中學高三(1)班學生李華。下面是你校布告欄里張貼的“征集接待家庭”的通知，請根據其內容用英語寫一封申請信。詞數不少于100。

注意：信的開頭和結尾已經給出（不計入詞數）。

HOST FAMILIES WANTED Some foreign teachers and students from an American high school will study in our school during the summer vacation. Host families are wanted to accommodate our friends. REQUIREMENTS: ◇ Good English. ◇ A SEPARATE room. ◇ transportation. ◇ … If interested, please send your APPLICATION IN ENGLISH to the International Department before SATURDAY. Please consult us for any further information.

 

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Three.                                     

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Three. I’m writing in reply to the notice for host families. I think I have several reasons to accommodate one foreign friend. First, I believe my English is good enough to communicate with foreigners. Also, my good communication skills enable me to keep a good relationship with others. As for accommodation, my family live in a 4-room apartment and there is always a spare room for the guest. In addition, my home is very convenient in transportation. Its location makes it easy to take either subways or buses to most places. I have also got support from my parents, who said yes without hesitation when informed of my wish.

I would appreciate it if my application is taken into account.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查書信類作文，要求寫一封自薦信，是關于征集接待家庭的，要點都已經給出，是以通知的形式給出，寫作前要讀懂讀透通知內容，包括語言，住宿和交通的情況做出說明，審題時注意本文使用的時態，運用合適的語法規則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用省略句，倒裝句和強調句型準確表述。如范文里面的Its location makes it easy to take either subways or buses to most places.和 I have also got support from my parents, who said yes without hesitation when informed of my wish.還有要用適當的關聯詞把文章串聯起來：象also, In addition,,等等。

考點：考查書信類短文寫作。

點評：書信類短文的關鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，詞匯句型的選用，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。