Question

自從 “超級(jí)女聲”在全國(guó)大獲成功后熒屏上青少年才藝展示表演越來(lái)越多。就此，有些學(xué)生認(rèn)為中學(xué)生應(yīng)專注于讀書(shū)，不應(yīng)該過(guò)早踏上舞臺(tái)；有些學(xué)生則不以為然。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)容，以Are middle school students too young to be on TV shows? 為題，為某英語(yǔ)雜志寫一篇120左右的英語(yǔ)短文。

    看法一： 太早參加演出，不利學(xué)習(xí)。理由：1. 沒(méi)有形成自己的演出風(fēng)格，僅靠模仿，    不是真藝術(shù)；2. 女孩們過(guò)多迷于“明星夢(mèng)”，忽視學(xué)習(xí)；3. 演出花費(fèi)太多時(shí)間與精力，不利集中精力學(xué)習(xí)。

    看法二：應(yīng)該參加演出，展示才華。理由：1. 表演節(jié)目提供了參與社會(huì)活動(dòng)的機(jī)會(huì)； 2. 豐富演出經(jīng)驗(yàn)，有利于將來(lái)的音樂(lè)生涯；3. 人各有夢(mèng)，抓住機(jī)會(huì)實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想。

    你的觀點(diǎn) 請(qǐng)自由發(fā)揮1. 。。。。。。 2. 。。。。。。 3. 。。。。。。

    注意: 1.行文應(yīng)連貫流暢, 內(nèi)容要充實(shí)完整;

         2.題目和開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已經(jīng)給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

         3. 詞數(shù)要求: 至少120左右。

              Are middle school students too young to be on TV shows?

   Since “Super Voice Girls” became a big hit all over the country, there are more and more teen talent shows on the TV screen now. Are middle school students too young to be on TV shows? Some students think so.

Answer 1

Are middle school students too young to be on TV shows?

Since “Super Voice Girls” became a big hit all over the country, there are more and more teen

talent shows on the TV screen now. Are middle school students too young to be on TV shows? Some students think so. In their opinion, teenagers haven’t formed their own style of performance yet. Just imitating their icons’ voice and actions is not the real art of singing and performing. It’s reported that some young girls are too absorbed in “star dream”, thus ignoring their study. What’s more, such TV shows take up too much time and energy. As middle school students, they should concentrate on their study at present.

However, other students think it right for teenagers to show their talents of art. TV shows like “Super Voice Girls” provide students with an opportunity to participate in social activities, where they can gain rich experience, which will surely contribute a lot to their future musical career. As we all know, different people have different dreams. It’s very important for them to grasp the chance and try to make their dreams come true.

    Personally, important as study is, it is not the only thing we can do. We should have a wide range of opportunities to develop our abilities. We may as well show our qualities to people when possible. (or: As for myself, although it is a good stage for young girls to show their ability, as middle school students, they must first have more knowledge. They should put more effort into their schoolwork.)

解析:

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