Question

假設你是某市一中的學生李明，現在你向市長寫一封信，反映學校周邊的交通安全問題。要點如下：

1.學校靠近幾條主要街道，很多學生和老師得橫過街道才能進入學校大門；

2.在交通高峰時期，車輛很多，學生過街上學不得不在車流中穿行；

3.有的家長為確保學生上學安全，每天開車送孩子,這使交通更加擁擠不堪；

4.建議政府采取措施（可適當發揮），以免發生事故。

①詞數：100個左右

②參考詞匯：交通高峰時期rush hour，穿行thread one’s way.

③開頭已寫好，不計入詞數

Dear Mayor,

I’m a student of No.1 Middle School. Here I have something to tell you.

Yours,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mayor,                                                     

I am a student of No.1 Middle School. Here I have something important to tell you. Our school stands near some main streets, and many students as well as teachers have to cross the streets before they enter the school gate. In rush hours there are so many cars, buses and trucks going back and forth that we have to thread our way through the moving cars and buses. In order to make sure that their children are safe, some parents send their children to school with motorcycles or even private cars every day, which makes the busy streets more crowded.

I think the government should do something to improve the situation. Maybe an overpass can be built over the road to prevent the traffic accidents from happening. In addition，citizens should be encouraged to turn to public transportation like buses, BRT, which will ease traffic jams. It would be appreciated if you could take my suggestions into consideration.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類短文。本文的要點都已經給了出來，考生只需要翻譯即可，難點在于運用合適的詞匯和句型把要點的意思表達出來，可以使用多樣化的句式，如倒裝句，省略句等，讓文章更有層次。在寫作的時候要使用合適的連接詞如what’s more，on the other hand等，讓文章更流暢。

考點：考查提綱類作文

點評：提綱類作文的關鍵是把要點都要表達出來，不要有遺漏，在寫作的時候要使用合適的高級的句型，和高級的詞匯提高文章的層次，也要使用連接詞來連接全文。