Question

假設你是李華。希望通過外籍教師Peter 找一位英語筆友。請寫一封短信，描述一下你理想中筆友的條件，并說明為什么選這樣的筆友。具體條件包括：

1．年齡；

2．性別；

3．愛好（旅游、運寵物等）。

注意：

1．詞數100左右。

2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3．開頭語已為你寫好。

Dear Peter

I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.

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Best regards,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter，

   I’m writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor. I want to have a pen friend hopefully a girl in her early twenties and with interests similar to mine. In my mind she is someone who is interested in traveling swimming and playing table tennis. Besides it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time.

With such a pen friend I think I can share with her our traveling experiences taking care of pets or whatever we have in common. And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查應用文中的書信的寫作。希望通過外籍教師Peter 找一位英語筆友。描述一下你理想中筆友的條件，并說明為什么選這樣的筆友。要點都已經給出，書信類短文的關鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。但是要點只是提綱，考生還要在此基礎上增加細節，同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。審題時注意本文使用一般現在時，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。還要用適當的連接詞被句子連接起來，象for instance, Furthermore,等詞，這樣文章顯得更連貫。

【亮點說明】In my mind she is someone who is interested in traveling swimming and playing table tennis. 這句話用了定語從句， it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. 這句話用了it做形式主語的句子和原因狀語從句， With such a pen friend I think I can share with her our traveling experiences taking care of pets or whatever we have in common. 這句話是whatever引導的讓步狀語從句，范文中還使用了 Besides這樣的關聯詞。

考點：考查書信類作文