Question

請(qǐng)結(jié)合材料，按要求用英文寫作

Nowadays, many young people get addicted to playing their cellphones wherever they are, completely

 ignoring their friends around.  

要求：

（1）就此材料發(fā)表你的感想；

（2）應(yīng)緊扣材料，有明確的觀點(diǎn)；

（3）在答題卡上作答，字?jǐn)?shù)不少于60。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

As is shown in a survey conducted recently, an increasing number of young people are currently abandoning themselves to their cellphone world, without caring about their friends nearby.

As far as I’m concerned, it is not advisable to behave this way and we should use the cellphone properly. Useful as the cellphone, it can by no means take the place of face-to face communication. Furthermore, it is absolutely impolite to keep playing with cellphone, ignoring our friends around.

Therefore, there is no denying that we are supposed to put our phones aside to enjoy a better social life with our friends.

【解析】

   這是一篇就一個(gè)社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，發(fā)表自己看法的議論文。首先審題：社會(huì)現(xiàn)象應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)表示。材料：Nowadays, many young people get addicted to playing their cellphones wherever they are, completely

 ignoring their friends around.  現(xiàn)在，許多年輕人無(wú)論在哪里都沉迷于玩自己手機(jī)，完全無(wú)視他們身邊的朋友。表明了作者對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象的基本態(tài)度----不贊成這樣做。所以，組織短文時(shí)：

首先，用三段式寫作。第一段簡(jiǎn)單介紹這種現(xiàn)象，引入話題。第二段說(shuō)明自己的觀點(diǎn)，并陳述原因。原因應(yīng)盡可能具體、結(jié)合實(shí)際，同時(shí)注意行文前后邏輯合理。最后，換一種表達(dá)來(lái)表明自己的觀點(diǎn)，起到畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

文章用三段式來(lái)分別說(shuō)明1. 總玩手機(jī)忽視同伴的現(xiàn)象。2. 這種現(xiàn)象所造成的不良影響。3. 得出結(jié)論，明確觀點(diǎn)。文中用到了conducted currently 做后置定語(yǔ)，ignoring our friends around, 做伴隨狀語(yǔ)， properly, absolutely, furthermore, therefore,高級(jí)詞匯， by no means, abandon oneself to, take the place of. be supposed to do sth., put sth. aside 固定短語(yǔ)，as far as I am concerned, useful as the cellphone倒裝句，there is no denying that, 等固定句型，使文章看起來(lái)層次分明，要點(diǎn)齊全，句式豐富，內(nèi)容充實(shí)。

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