Question

15．請根據以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文，詞數120．
Global Shortage of Fresh Water
1．人們認為淡水是取之不盡的（提示：雨水，河水，井水）
2．實際上淡水是短缺的（提示：人口增加，工業用水增加，污染嚴重）
3．我們應當怎么辦（提示：節約用水，開發新水源）

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息，用英語寫一篇短文，對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力．首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭．同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，在發表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．
【亮點說明】范文中出現一些常見的短語used up用光；plenty of許多；In fact事實上；At the same time與此同時；In this way用這種方式；It seems as if water is always available around us and we never have to worry about water shortage．這個句子運用 it seem as if 好象 這個固定句型結構；At the same time，a large amount of water has been polluted and wasted every day．這個句子運用現在完成時的被動語態．We have to protect the existing water resources and develop new ones在這個句子中protect 與develop是并列的，所以形式保持一致；
It seems as if water is always available around us and we never have to worry about water shortage．（高分句型一）
With the rapid increase of population and fast development of industries，water is more needed than before．（高分句型二）
Everyone should consciously save on water and certain law should be made that no water will be polluted．（高分句型三）

解答 Global Shortage of Fresh Water
       People often think that water will never be used up．There is plenty of water，such as rain，water from the rivers and wells．It seems as if water is always available around us and we never have to worry about water shortage．（高分句型一）
       In fact water is rather limited on the earth．With the rapid increase of population and fast development of industries，water is more needed than before．（高分句型二）At the same time，a large amount of water has been polluted and wasted every day．Some big cities in China are facing the problem of water shortage already．There，water supply is controlled and industry has been restrained．
       What should we do about the water shortage？I think，first，the people should be made aware of the real situation about the water．Everyone should consciously save on water and certain law should be made that no water will be polluted．（高分句型三）We have to protect the existing water resources and develop new ones．In this way I believe that our cities will not be thirsty for water in the future．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．