Question

假設你是紅星中學的學生李華，為校刊英語園地寫一篇題為“Our Spring Outing”的英文稿件。請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，敘述上周你們班從準備春游到春游結束的完整過程。
注意.詞數不少于60.
提示詞.游樂園amusement park  垃圾 litter  可回收的垃圾箱 recycling bin
不可回收的垃圾箱non-recycling bin

Our Spring Outing

Answer 1

Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.
The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.
We were tired but happy.

試題分析：本文屬于看圖作文比較好寫的題目。首先對第一幅圖的內容進行描述，說明我們開班會討論的內容及同學們各自的想法such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park.最終是決定去登山go mountain climbing.然后說明我們很早出發去爬山，當到達山頂時被美景吸引但是也看到了垃圾到處都是we were shocked to see litter here and there,最后我們開始撿垃圾，將不同的垃圾繼續分類，分別放入可回收的垃圾箱和不可回收的垃圾箱中we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.最后一句話結尾很累但是非常的高興即可We were tired but happy.
點評：本文的寫作不難，對于敘事類文體，對文章的條理性要把握好，在寫作過程注意使用“起承轉合”的詞語或是句型表達，多使用被動，倒裝、虛擬來提升作文的美度。在平時寫作時應該多進行閱讀，對閱讀過程中寫的好的表達要進行積累，并且學以致用，勤積累，多背誦，這樣才能作文才能穩步的提升。