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英語課上,老師要求同桌同學(xué)相互修改作文。假設(shè)以下便條為你同桌所寫，請(qǐng)你對(duì)其進(jìn)行修改。便條中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（^），并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
3．必須按答題要求做題，否則不給分。
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month late. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.

Answer 1

When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One                         
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day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father∧the
which                                       for
money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half
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myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed
when
him the money a month late. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I
later   gave
was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.

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