Question

請以中學(xué)生的名義寫一篇文章呼吁世界各地的中學(xué)生加入到拯救大熊貓（the giant panda) 的行列中來。內(nèi)容包括：

大熊貓是中國的稀有動物， 也是世界的稀有動物之一，為中國人民和世界人民所喜愛；

大熊貓生長在山里，以竹子為食，由于山林遭到破壞，竹子被砍伐，大熊貓覓食越來越困難，正瀕臨滅絕；

我國已建立數(shù)個自然保護區(qū)來保護大熊貓，但需要更多的資金。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右；

      2. 要求用到提示內(nèi)容，但不要逐字翻譯；

      3. 行文連貫、流暢、完整。

                                                                                          

                                                                                          

                                                                                          

                                                                                          

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

    The giant panda is not only a rare animal in China but also one of the rarest animals on the earth. It is loved by people all over the world.

    The home of the giant panda is in the mountains, where it feeds on the tender bamboo leaves. As more and more forests are being destroyed and most of the bamboo has been cut down, it is becoming more and more difficult for giant pandas to find food for themselves. To save pandas, China has set up some nature reserves. But more money is needed to carry out this important rescue project.

    It is our eager hope that people who care for the conservation of rare animals will lend us a hand to help save giant pandas, so that they can live with us forever.

【解析】

試題分析：本題是一篇材料作文。要求寫一篇呼吁拯救大熊貓的文章。寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，作文時，要把所有要點都包含在內(nèi)，注意使用連接詞來銜接上下句和前后文。可以分三部分來寫。第一段總寫，介紹大熊貓；第二段寫大熊貓的生活習(xí)性；第三段總結(jié)，呼吁大家行動起來保護大熊貓。使用第一人稱，使作文比較客觀真實；時態(tài)的使用要正確，盡量使用一些重點的語法知識。

【亮點說明】范文使用了短語、固定搭配not only...but also, all over the world, for themselves, set up, carry out, lend us a hand, care for等，可以看出，基礎(chǔ)知識掌握扎實；范文使用了被動語態(tài)It is loved by..., more money is needed等，使意思的表達更客觀，更有說服力；范文使用了非限制性定語從句where it feeds on the tender bamboo leaves和限制性定語從句who care for the conservation；固定句型one of the+最高級+名詞復(fù)數(shù)；As more and more forests are being destroyed隨著.......；主語從句It is our eager hope that...和目的狀語從句so that they can...。

考點：材料作文