Question

假如你叫李華，你班的同學就中學生是否應該帶手機上學持不同意見。請你根據下列信息，給Teens的編輯寫一封信，介紹同學們的看法，并闡明自己的觀點。

60%的同學贊成	40%的同學反對
1.方便和家長、同學聯系 2.有拍照、聽音樂等多功能 可以放松自己 3.時尚	1.上網聊天，沉迷游戲，經常發短信 2.影響學生集中精力學習 3.有時影響課堂教學

注意 : 1. 信的格式與開頭已為你寫好;     2. 詞數:120 左右

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had on whether the school students should carry a mobile phone to school.  Opinions on the question are divided as follows.

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Yours sincerely

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had on whether mobile phones should be brought to school. Opinions on the question are divided as follows.

Sixty percent of the students subscribe to the view that students can bring a mobile phone to school because it has many advantages. If a student has a mobile phone, he she can contact his parents and friends easily. (It is convenient for a student who carries a mobile phone to get in touch with his/her parents and friends.) He can also take pictures and enjoy music to relax himself. Besides, it’s fashionable to have a mobile phone.

While 40 percent of the students are opposed to the view, because with mobile phones some students may have a chat on the Internet and be addicted to playing games. What is worse, some even get into the habit of sending text messages to their friends. Thus, students may not focus their attention on (concentrate on /pay much attention to) their lessons. If by chance the phone is not turned off, the ringing will disturb the class. Furthermore, using mobile phones will add to their parents’ economic burdens.

Actually, students should place their study before other things and there is no need for us to use mobile phones. Personally, I don’t think it’s a good idea to bring mobile phones to school,

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：本文是關于是否應該帶手機上學的話題的討論，文章的要點很全，對于考生來說，只需要翻譯成英文即可。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

考點：考查應用文書信的寫作

點評：書信是高考常考的文體，把握好各個應用文的寫作格式也是平時學習過程中必須注意的，同時平時學習時多進行作文模板的記憶，萬能句型的積累，高中作文寫作，要注意在寫作之前，首先認真審題，并在腦海中回想自己積累的哪些句式、句型、單詞能用進來，這些單詞、句型都應是經典的，不會錯的。寫的過程中，多注意靈活使用定語從句，包括非限制性定語從句。要熟悉英美人寫文章的習慣，遇到專有地名、人名一定要用非限制性定語從句，強調唯一性。平時的英語作文就可以多嘗試使用這些表達，考試時才能游刃有余，胸有成竹。