Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你們班上個(gè)月開展了一次以“閱讀名著，再現(xiàn)經(jīng)典”為主題的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，給校刊“英語園地”寫一篇英文稿件，記述你和同學(xué)參加此次活動(dòng)的全過程。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

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Answer 1

【答案】Last month, on a Monday class meeting, our Chinese teacher announced a significant activity themed “Reading and Acting out Classics”. Luckily, I was honored to be elected as the screenwriter and director of our group.

No sooner had I arrived at home than I threw myself into choosing book and a famous novel “A Dream of Red Mansions” popped into my head. I read the whole novel attentively and devoted myself to writing the play. Then our group contributed to practice.

Ultimately came the big time, we presented the performance in our classroom with brilliant acting skills and vivid lines, which was highly praised by our classmates.

Finally, we uploaded our video clip on WeChat Moments. Just several minutes later, we received many good comments. Through this activity, we had a profound understanding that reading classic novel can not only improve our literary competence but also enrich our spirit. How significant the experience is!

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)要求根據(jù)圖文進(jìn)行寫作。

假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你們班上個(gè)月開展了一次以“閱讀名著，再現(xiàn)經(jīng)典”為主題的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，給校刊“英語園地”寫一篇英文稿件，記述你和同學(xué)參加此次活動(dòng)的全過程。人稱使用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以過去時(shí)為主。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。