Question

【題目】假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。上星期六，你和同學們參觀了中國近五年偉大成就展。請按照以下四幅圖的先后順序，以“A Visit to the Exhibition on China’s Achievements”為題，給校刊“英語角”寫一篇英文稿件，介紹參觀的全過程。

注意：詞數不少于60。

提示詞：講解員 docent

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Answer 1

【答案】Last Saturday, my classmates and I went to the Beijing Exhibition Hall to see the exhibition on China’s achievements in the last 5 years which turned out to be a memorable experience for us.

The exhibition attracted thousands of people all over the country, so we had to wait a long time to get in. Luckily, we met a docent who gave us a detailed introduction of the development during these years. We Listened attentively and were deeply impressed by the brilliant success of our country. When we stepped into the Hi-tech display section, our eyes were caught by the fashionable appearance of the high-speed train model “Fuxing”, which is popularly called one of the “New Four Great Inventions” of China. We were so amazed at the exhibits that we couldn’t help taking pictures all the time. Before leaving, with the words “Chinese Dream” as a setting, we had a group photo to record the great moment.

The visit to the Exhibition gives us greater faith in Chinese dream, to which our personal dreams are closely related.

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇看圖作文。上星期六，你和同學們參觀了中國近五年偉大成就展。請按照以下四幅圖的先后順序，以“A Visit to the Exhibition on China’s Achievements”為題，給校刊“英語角”寫一篇英文稿件，介紹參觀的全過程。認真閱讀四幅圖畫，認清寫作要求然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態。列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來。寫作時注意時態、語態的合理運用，同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

【亮點說明】

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